{"id":3057,"date":"2013-05-27T19:32:06","date_gmt":"2013-05-27T23:32:06","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ageofanimus.com\/?p=3057"},"modified":"2013-05-27T19:32:06","modified_gmt":"2013-05-27T23:32:06","slug":"changes-in-direction","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.ageofanimus.com\/?p=3057","title":{"rendered":"Changes in Direction"},"content":{"rendered":"

So it\u2019s Monday<\/span><\/span> again. Time to blog.<\/p>\n

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In a previous blog, I talked about how sometimes you get an idea and it totally changes the direction of the story you\u2019re writing. I said I\u2019d talk more about the specific example when we were a little further into the current Funnies storyline.<\/p>\n

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In the current storyline, Deema\u2019s adoptive father, Tomaw, has come for a visit. This is in parallel with Deema\u2019s origin in my Star Wars campaign. Deema, a Trandoshan, was adopted by one of my player\u2019s (Fab\u2019s) character, Mowat, a human. Fab has a deep history with the name Mowat, and it didn\u2019t feel right to appropriate it for my purposes. I saw nothing wrong with rearranging the letters to create a new name though, hence Tomaw.<\/p>\n

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Okay, so that explains the name, but what does this have to do with storyline changes?<\/p>\n

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The original direction I had set was that Tomaw would visit, and everybody would like him as one of those stand up type of guys. He\u2019d have great stories to tell of his life as a ranger and good advice to give to everyone. A nice idea, but no inherent comedic potential. What to do? Now, given that Tomaw is directly inspired by Fab\u2019s character, I asked Fab if he were to cast Mowat as an animal, what animal would he see him as. He chose a wolf. Or at least, I seem to remember he chose a wolf. At any rate, he\u2019s a wolf now. Was that something I could work with? Well, hey! \u00a0I\u2019ve introduced a wolf character before (the leader of the Pickle Patch Bandits)! Wouldn\u2019t it be funny if the two were related? Twins even? One twin became a criminal, and the other decided to be a law official. Clich\u00e9 perhaps, but I decided to go with it. This set up the case of mistaken identity when Tomaw arrives on the scene. It allowed me to revisit one of my favorite Sass gags as well. Perfect! Now, what else?<\/p>\n

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I wanted to give Barnaby some screen time, so I wanted to think of a way to involve him directly into whatever direction I was going to go with Tomaw. Then it came to me, \u201cWhat if Tomaw had a grudge against bears?\u201d This held with the spirit of Fab\u2019s character who started out with a grudge against Trandoshans (which is why I made Deema a Trandoshan to begin with). That gave me a hook to involve Barnaby and Nektara, but it made Tomaw come off a little less likable. Still, I could work with that.<\/p>\n

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When I plan a storyline, I like to give myself a rough estimate of the number of strips I\u2019d like to fill with the storyline. I have certain storylines I want to tell at certain times of the year. For example, I want the next storyline to take place during the summer months. That means I need the current storyline to come to a close by the end of June or very early July. I\u2019ve already used a good number of the strips I\u2019d allotted to the current storyline and I haven\u2019t much touched on the original ideas for Tomaw (where everybody likes him and he becomes like a surrogate father to the group). Two decisions I made when fleshing out the character led to a somewhat different story from what I had planned. But that\u2019s okay. I like the direction the story has taken so far. I can always go on for a few extra strips or at worst, I can have Tomaw visit again in the future.<\/p>\n

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So that\u2019s all for this week. I hope you have fun following Tomaw\u2019s storyline.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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