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Apr 022012
 

This weekend I did something I had not done before:

I sketched out my comic strips before I drew them.

Yes, until this past weekend, I would just draw strips straight off. As I draw them with a tablet, editing is easy enough. I can move things around if I’m not happy with them or I need to make space. The comic designs are simple enough that I never felt the need to sketch the strips out before.

What was so special about my first strip of the weekend so as to make me decide it would be a good idea to sketch it first? A number of things:

  1. I had six panels to draw
  2. I had a lot of text.
  3. I had new characters to draw
  4. Four out of the six panels NEEDED to show at least three characters.

The first thing I do when I’m drawing a strip is choose a panel layout. When I choose a layout for a strip, I need to look at which panel will have the most text and/or a lot of stuff going on visually. I have to choose a layout where that panel is the largest. With five panels, this usually works out well.  The hardest ones to layout are when the second of fifth panel need to be big (because then the first or sixth panel is usually too small). For the six panel strips I’ve done so far, I’ve found that my only choice was to have every panel be the same size, either 3X2 or 2X3. If a strip has simple visuals but a lot of dialogue, I’ll use 2X3 (there’s more vertical space for the word balloons), otherwise I use 3X2. In this case, the 2X3 panels were too narrow so I opted for 3X2.

I am not economical with my words. I find wordy dialogue more interesting (and funnier) than short dialogue. This means my text balloons have to be big to fit this wordy dialogue. To make sure the text balloons don’t cover up anything important, I’ll lay them down before I draw a panel. This way I know how much space I really have and draw my panel to fit. Sometimes at this point I’ll realize that there’s no way to fit the word balloons in the panels as I had intended. If I can, I’ll shift a word balloon one panel over (before or after depending on the case). If that doesn’t work, I’ll try to rewrite shorter lines. If THAT doesn’t work, I just do the best I can. Fortunately, I haven’t as of yet had to ditch a strip idea because I couldn’t get it to fit. For this strip I had to shift one line from panel 3 to panel 2, rewrite one line in panel 3 to be shorter, cut out one line from panel 4 completely, rewrite the remaining line in that panel and switch the order of the two lines in panel 3 to make up for the loss of the line from panel 4 to give me the most space possible to draw.

So now I was ready to draw. But I had new characters to draw. All three appear for the first time in panel 2 WITH Nektara. I didn’t want to commit to designing a character, drawing him fully detailed a certain size and then finding out I couldn’t fit the other three in and have to redraw the whole panel over. So I sketched each character on a separate layer and then shifted them around so that everything fit well. It worked so well that I sketched the other panels first too. And then the second strip of the weekend as well.

One thing I’ve learned in doing this, is that when I sketch I don’t have to worry about overlap. Nektara’s ears are not flush with the top of her head. Before, I would draw her head and then the ears on a separate layer so that when coloured, the line behind the ears would disappear. Now I just sketch the character out and when I draw the finished line over the sketch I don’t draw the line of the head that’s behind the ears.

To experienced cartoonists I’m sure this is all basic stuff, but I’m figuring this all out on my own. I suppose I could have read a book on cartooning before starting to draw the Funnies, but then I’d have had nothing to talk about this week.

 

Mar 302012
 

“Are you okay, Zo?”

It was dark and it hurt when she moved. Zoë tried to sit up and immediately regretted it. She groaned, “What happened?”

“It was the storm. I was trying to find a place to land when the wind blew you out of your seat. You’re lucky I was able to catch up to you!”

Zoë forced through the pain to sit up. Her head was throbbing, “What happened to the tether?”

“I think it snapped…Do you have any food on you, Zo? I’m hungry! Preferably pickles if you have some!”

Zoë slowly started to feel around for her pack, “You know we don’t have any pick…” She stopped all of a sudden. “Where’s my pack?”

“I think it flew off when the tether snapped.”

“My scope!” Zoë was heartbroken. Her scope was her most prized possession. It had been a gift from her uncle when she was accepted into the Wing. It had been really expensive. It would be a long time before she could afford another one.

“You mean this?” Popkin produced a cylindrical objet from his plumage. “You were clinging tightly to this when I caught you. I thought it might be food, but it tasted awful!”

Zoë took the offered scope back. There was obvious scratching on it from where Popkin’s beak had bitten into it, but other than that it was fully intact! “Thanks Popkin!”

“No problem Zo! Only, what are we going to do for food without your pack? I’m hungry!”

Zoë forced herself to her feet. She was a little wobbly at first, but she was able to stay on her paws. “We’ll have to forage. Is there a stream nearby? You said you liked to fish.” She looked around. Everything was so dark and there were so many trees. “Popkin? Are we in the Forlorn Forest?”

Popkin nodded his head, “I couldn’t fly and hold on to you at the same time, so I had to land in the forest. I don’t know why they call it the Four Corn Forest though. I haven’t seen so much as a kernel!”

That was going to make things difficult. Furs got lost in the Forlorn Forest. Really lost! Some said that the Forest itself conspired against furs to keep them from leaving. Zoë considered that to be a fairy tale told to children to keep them from wandering into the forest. She could send Popkin out on his own, but she didn’t trust that the bird would be able to find her again. Best to stick together. Besides, she was confident that with her scope she’d be able to navigate their way out.

“Fly ahead of me, Popkin…” she told her friend, “Look for a stream so we can get some water and maybe some fish. I’ll follow on paw.”

“Okay Zo!” Popkin spread his wings and with a couple of flaps, he was off.

Zoë watched him fly for a moment and then slowly started to follow. If only it didn’t hurt when she moved…

Mar 282012
 

Welcome to Mash-up Wednesday, a new feature here at Age of Animus! Here I experiment crossing Age of Animus characters with other pop culture icons. I’m not going to guarantee a new mash-up every week, but when I have a new one to share, it’ll be posted on Wednesdays.

Without further ado, let’s get to this week’s mash-ups:

I’m a big DC Comics fan, and I thought it’d be fun to draw the Animus Funnies as superheroes.

First, there’s Aquafox!

At night, the streets of Sixtus are watched over by Rab-Bat!

Rab-Bat is often at odds with Catfeline! She was the trickiest character to name actually. With the other “Man” or “Woman” names, I’d simply substitute the species of the character, but in this case, that would have given Catcat.

Moving right along, here’s Wonder Bear!

And because one good bear deserves another, here’s Superbear, ready to fight for truth, justice and the Animus way! I thought of inverting the S on his chest, you know, because Barnaby isn’t very smart. But then, you’d think he was Bizarro, not Superman!

Patrolling the skies is the mighty Hawkmouse! Zoë was almost Green Lantern, until I thought that since she flies as a member of the Mouse Wing this made a lot of sense.

Next we have The Question!

Okay, so that felt like a cheat, so I drew another Big Oonch superhero, Captain Oonchvel! (I still found a way to not show his eyes!)

Since Oonch got to be two heroes, I decided Cyran would also pull double duty as The Fastest Rabbit Alive, the Flash (because the wings of Flash’s mask made for another way to work in Cyran’s ears)

I make no secret about Green Arrow being my favorite superhero, so I couldn’t leave him out of this. Here’s Red’n’Green Arrow! (I’m really pleased with how the pose turned out on this one!)

And finally we have Red Rich!

What? Red Rich is already a superhero! Okay fine, here he is as Green Lantern, looking suspiciously like former Lantern, Ch’p!

That’s it for this instalment! See you next time!